This week we have just finished our creative writing that I have been working on for 2 weeks.
Here is my Awesome work:
😮The Day My Bunny Went Savage!😮
(And I died)!
By Abby Crighton,
Chapter 1:
“Are we really moving here?” I Asked. “Yes, it was the only house for sale.” said Mum. “Did you know over 80 people went savage in this house and no police men could find out why.” I said shivering. “What a bunch of rubbish.” said Mum. “Yeah Lilly” said Max (my little brother). I stepped out of the car and walked slowly towards the house. “Lilly, come back here and grab your bunny”, yelled mum angrily. “Ok!” I knew something was going to happen in this house. Max loved it though. He ran off into the house with his cat in his arms. He was not as scared as I was, well obviously. I came over to the car where mum was waiting. “Here”, Mum said in an impatient tone. Me and Max walked into the house slowly and opened the door to our new bedroom. “It has that old people smell,” said Max sniffing the air. As soon as I set up my room I ran outside and got my bunny cage and set it up for Bella. I put Bella in her cage and ran off into the house once again. What was going to happen? Was I safe? Who knows?
Chapter 2:
When I woke up the next morning I felt funny. I started screaming when I noticed what was wrong. My hair was all tied in braids and glued down onto the side of the bed. Mum and Max ran into my room. Mum was yelling at Max and these are some of the things she said:
Why did you do this, Max?
You are grounded, Max!
Go to your room, Max!
You are a naughty boy, very naughty!!!!
And here are some of the things I said:
Get him out of here he wrecked my hair!
Why is he so mean?
Go away, Max!
Why are you so annoying, Max?
I JUST HATE YOU!!!!!
I do think I went a little too hard on him with some of the things I said, but at the same time, he kind of deserved it. I still love him though, I just got angry. When mum finished giving me a haircut she ran down to tell Max off even more. So while she was doing that I went and fed Max’s cat and my bunny. When I had finished feeding Max’s cat, I went and feed Bella. When I walked outside I got a shock! “AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Chapter 3:
I fell to the floor and before I knew it I saw the faces of my mum and brother and the colour of midnight black filled my vision. I’d fainted. When I woke up I was on the couch with my blanket over me and the fire on. What had happened I wondered? I pulled my blanket off and fell to the floor. But I got back up again and charged on. When I got outside my heart started pumping. I saw it! MY BUNNY! Not my bunny anymore, it was a zombie bunny!!! I ran over to the cage and stared into its eyes as my bunny jumped up and tried to bite me! My bunny stopped for a minute. “That’s the end of that!” Max said stabbing a needle into my bunny. ”Max!”
“Keep it down out there!” Yelled mum from the kitchen. I was so angry I just wanted to run away.
Chapter 4:
That night it gave me an idea. I was going to run away from home. I got up at midnight and packed the suitcase my aunt gave me. I packed it all up and I was off…
In the morning Max got up and looked around the room. “MUM”! he yelled. “What, what?” My part of the room was bare, brown and boring. “This room is bare, brown and boring” said mum.
I was on my way to the forest. It was late so I went to bed. In the morning I checked my cell phone and there was a picture of me sleeping, but I am alone. I was scared, I knew this would not last long. I went home. At my house I climbed in the window. I saw shadows in the kitchen, but I didn’t want to talk to mum so I just went up stairs to my room. Max was sleeping on his bed. I heard mum call my name from down stairs. I got up and start heading down stairs. As I got to the top of the stairs my mum pulled me back and whispered, “Don’t go down there, I heard it too.” There must be someone in the house. I ran up stairs pushing mum away from me. I locked my bedroom door.
The next morning mum said that she was going to the markets and taking Max. I was old enough to be home alone.
Chapter 5:
It was 5:00 and mum still wasn’t home, I was starting to get worried. I ran to my room and shut the door. The next morning mum still wasn’t home. I heard a slight creek outside my door. “Ahhhh”! So here I am lying in a puddle of my own blood. When my mum gets home and comes up to my bedroom all she sees is me lying dead on the floor surrounded by cheery red blood. My mum all of a sudden falls to the floor and blood starts pouring out of her like a waterfall. The murderer strikes again. THE END!!
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