popcorn writing

Kia ora
last week we did some popcorn writing using the five senses and here is mine...

I can hear the popcorn popping in the microwave, suddenly want to stuff some in my face.

I taste the yummy buttery popcorn in between my teeth and my lips are all slimy because of the butter. The mini cload feels like a real cloud because it is wet and puffy and yellow. I want more but i can’t, i suddenly have to, i grab a hand full! I stuff it in my head. It was a little bit burnt.I see the popcorn popping in the microwave as the bag gets fatter. I can see that the butter has melted in the inside because the packet is all yellowish. But i can see that it is a little bit burnt. I can smell the yummy popcorn as it is in the microwave, as the microwave is going i can smell old air that smells like it has been in there for 100 years. I touch the popcorn as i have to put it in my mouth because it is too hot!

By Abby