My poem using the five senses

Kai Ora

Yesterday me and my class did some poems using the five senses, I did my poem about an old hospital. Next time I will improve my writing by adding more describing words. Here is my story,

The old hospital!

      

I slowly touch the old spooky beds as a whole lot of slimy goo drips from the bottom of them onto the old wooden floor.

I can hear the spooky ghosts floating around me in the dark room.

I can see old curtains that look like they have been there for 100 years or more.

I would never taste the goo that that was left on my fingers from when I touched one of the beds. As I look in front of me, I see a mummy!

by Abby